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OUTLINE:
Topic senetence:
Most people in Indonesia involve smoking.
Supporting details:
- They are health be bad then before.
- Make they are intelligence is down.
- They are can get disease.
concluding sentence:
so,it is clear Smoking not only useless but also damage.
Smoking is not only useless but also damage
Most people in Indonesia involve smoking.there are many effects of this.first of all,they are health be bad than before because many dabger substance in cigarette like CO,CO2,and nicotine,and it very dangerous to your health.second,smoking make they are intelligence is down because smoke of cigarette go to noise to brain which make blood gagged to brain and make your brain getting worst.finally,they are can get disease like heart attacks, cancers ,stroke and others.because since you smoking until now the danger of substance asseamble and to be a disease.so,it is clear that smoking not only useless but also damage.
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